All Comments on 'The House of V Volume 01: Katie'

Bravo. Suspenseful, intense and very very erotic.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

What a beautiful start for a new author. Welcome to Literotica and thank you for sharing your vision and words!

I must agree with Tess the attention to erotic detail was second to non, with one exception, when his phone rang he took from his pocket, considering he was naked at the time, maybe a reread before submission. But yet a very well described and written piece. Look forward to further writings from this authot

That's a great point, how did I miss that, needs an edit.

First rate, lots of suspense and eroticism. I like the description as mush as the action, sometimes a short story has to leave out the build-up, the character development. As the first part of a series, I'm very much looking forward to seeing where this leads. Great stuff!

Thank you, Frank. I am working on more stories.