All Comments on 'The House Sitter'

Certainly this deserves several more chapters.

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...but for a few small typos, and please watch things such as, <i>"the sound of a lounge chair being drug over."</i> The word is <i>dragged</i>. An editor would have corrected that.

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But, a great story, and I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter - although please don't spoil it by hurrying - take all the time you need to get it just right.

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I liked this story a lot. I thought it was a good read and you let the characters have fun without going over the top. Well done.

Is there more to the story? Will there be new chapters?

this was really good, please write another 1!!

Of course they are not lesbians are they?

I enjoyed the pace and getting to know the characters. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you.

Mmm mmm mmm.

Very sweet and beautiful