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Click here"Don't stop...please don't stop..." She could hardly get the words out.
He pulled his head back to only reply, "Yes, Miss Lucy."
As he sunk his tongue back in. As he licked deeper and deeper, she could feel herself reaching climax. She could feel her cum flush all over his face. She clutched his head as she felt wave and wave of orgasm flood though her body. There was nothing but pleasure overtaking her as her body shook involuntarily.
She took a couple of deep breathes and opened her eyes. There, across the room was Maria sitting in her chair, drinking her wine. Cody was at the door, fully clothed, standing like a soldier at attention. Lucy looked down and saw herself fully clothed except her shoes.
"Will that be all Miss?" Cody politely spoke.
Maria got up from her chair and strolled across the room. "For God's sake, at least put her shoes back on her."
Cody replied like a boot camp soldier. "Yes, Miss Maria."
Lucy looked at them both confused. All of that was so out of character for her, and here she sat like it never happened. "That's quite alright." She reached down and slid her shoes on her feet, clasping each one.
"Very well, Miss." Cody then bowed and excused himself from the room.
Maria helped Lucy up from the chair. "That is always my favorite spa treatment we provide. It gets better each time you do it, but can leave you a little woozy. How do you feel?
"I feel...great."
"That's good, child. Why don't you go your room and unwind some more. Dinner will be grilled on the patio at dusk in a few hours.
Lucy left the room and did as Miss Maria said. As she laid on her bed, she couldn't help but wonder whether all that happened. She then did something she never did before, she touched herself to climax. The entre time thinking only of Cody, and not Will.
- COMMENTS
Subtle28over 5 years agoAuthor...has been sent via Literotica messages (message board). It never could get past reviewers so I stopped trying (pushes the envelope a little). Hope you enjoy her....
Subtle28over 5 years agoAuthorMiss Black #8 could never get past the reviewers....but since you were such a fan, I just sent it to you via messages on Literotica. Enjoy.
Emirusover 5 years agoUnfortunately the answer has to be no. As you know I thought Miss Black was excellent (and that you should write further about her) and also enjoyed Dylan and Lynn (my only criticism being the ending) which I think ended where it needed to end although the ending was quite abrupt. One thing that I have realised is that one page stories don’t receive as good a response as those of two/three pages and Dylan, for example, would have been better submitted as one story not three.
I have been eagerly awaiting your next offering but the seven month wait has not been worth it. It feels as if this is the first thing you have written or someone, inferior to you as a writer, has submitted it using your name. Unlike your previous stories I feel that you really needed the services of an editor for this story and not just for the grammatical issues.
The beginning was very good and continued right up to the arrival at Villa-Lobos and the non-stereotypical “let’s put everything right for you” resort. After that it went downhill quickly and whereas with Miss Black and Dylan I wanted to read more I don’t feel the same way about this story.
I haven’t voted because I don’t believe in giving low scores. No matter how bad a story is, as a writer myself, I know that a writer has put a lot of effort into their writing and to reward them with a kick in the teeth is totally wrong.
