All Comments on 'The Hunting Lodge'

Just horrible and about 9 pages too long.

Yes you just killed a few sacred cows as you are as good a hunter as a writer.

Man it has been months that i have been waiting for your summer of Indian aunties new chapter when your gonna post it ??

@Anon, if you think it's just horrible and still you read all the 9 pages, it really says a lot about you.

Conflicted, as it is cucky but the end is a twist and revenge that sorta balances the scales. I skipped from page 2 to the end, but dont think i missed mush.

i was going to rip your story But that ending was excellent, Very original

Fantastic!

Keep writing more stories

Too lengthy with so many digressions. But very erotic and we'll written. Five stars from me.

I liked it till about page 8. The revenge saga at the end just did not fit the mood the story set at the beginning. Can we request a rewrite with a fun, one time, cuckold story?

I love it! Thanks for writing this.

@patillie ... well this IS litEROTICA ... so most of the story will be about sex. The rest of the stuff is just what makes this slightly different.

@Gmann006 , people either love it or hate the ending.

I really liked reading this story and finished it in one go but somewhere at the end during or before the gang bang i got bored because it was predictable and just wanted to see the ending. Overall I also liked the story and ending too. Please 🙏 start writting the main story of Summer of Indian Aunties

Great story, like the new elements. Are you planning a sequel?

The story could have ended in many ways. The unexpected ending chapter made it more likable. The possibility that Arun and Reshimi may undertake another wild sex will be eagerly awaited . Overall it is a good story with high erotica quotient true to its category.

An exceptionally good story with a plot twist. I am a huge fan of your writings. slutwife vidya is my fav

will you add more chapters to that story??

Very well written and I love the development of the story.

Gmann006, meherbaani bro.

@bizzarre_m, I had to make each guy have sex with Reshmi.

@temptation_9211, yes maybe I could have shortened the gangbang, but some people like long erotica they can come and read in stages.

Not sure when I am going to continue the summer of indian aunties.

@anon (all): not sure if there will be a sequel. This is supposed to be a one off story.

As for Vidya, hmm let's see . Not planning to continue at the moment.

@lotusluvr, thank you.

Too much melo drama and very little Sex

Long and Boring story,could be winded up in 2-3 pages.

End is cliched bollywood revenge story with no suspense

Msg to author:- Rather than experimenting on new stories , try to add more parts of existing series with differenet plots

Especially Vidya & Narges saga

Usually I would have split this story into four parts. The initial bet. The first couple of nights. The gang bang. And end. But I decided to sort of have it as one chapter.

To anon who said, "Msg to author:- Rather than experimenting on new stories , try to add more parts of existing series with differenet plots .Especially Vidya & Narges saga"

you can keep your suggestion to yourself. Don't like it, don't read it.

A moral or is it morality GangBang. Great Story.

One of the best slut wife stories. It took me a few days to finish; I was jerking off every page! And the twist! Never saw it coming. Excellent story.

Hey Spankedboy, excellent story. Gave it a 5 star rating. Looking forward to more stories from you.

Great story... Wild and Erotic... The twist in the end was superb with the revenge angle.

I wish we can could see some more roleplay from akram and friends on the final part where cheating housewife gets spanked and paddled. The BDSM aspect would have added additional flavor to the story.

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I'm re-posting another user's comment:

"Aashikboy - 1 day ago

Great story... Wild and Erotic... The twist in the end was superb with the revenge angle."

What’s the attraction to a gutter slut wife being used like a trash bag for a bunch of assholes? Or the cuck watching it all happen? Really just don’t get it.

@anon what's the attraction in coming to a story that you don't "get", and then commenting on it? Really just don't get it.

You plagiarized 'Slave Debbie" from ol' Joe's collection, on asstr.org, when they all three men are doing her. Pathetic!

It was just epic, awesome writing.. one of the best stories which i have come across in a long time.

@Anon, who accused me of plagiarizing "Slave Debbie"

You will find a lot of stories in this genre are very similar. I actually took a bit of Rickshaw Driver's Wife 02 (my own story) and modified parts for this story. So don't accuse of plagiarism, just remember that there's only so many ways you can describe a guy banging a girl.

This story is certainly awesome..but PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE..PLEASE FINISH SUMMER OF HOT INDIAN AUNTIES...I WANNA SEE THE END OF IT..I ALREADY REREAD IT LIKE A MILLION TIMES.. PLEASE 🥺

Fantastic story. Hope there is a follow up

Why audience is thinking of spankedboy becoming rude day by day?

A good author always learns from feedbacks.

And inculcate the same in upcoming works.

Hope you improvise this ....else

may lord "Save Thou Soul"

It was well written and with a good twist at the end…loved it as usual and as other fans of your work we all are waiting for summer of hot Indian aunties.Wich is by far your best n memorable and erotic one…but yes pls don’t make it cruel o sadist instead bring in the romance n excitement

When are you going to continue slave to my Indian maid

Loved it. All get to enjoy [some to suffer later]

Master plan by hubby

Very erotic story with a wife rediscovering her inner slut.

Pity that the three who fucked her didn't visit afterwards and although she had decided to stop cuckolding her husband, one they started groping her she

Couldn't resist, and she would become their weekend slut, fucktoy every weekend at home.

What is wrong with these Muslim writers?? They can’t keep their wives …so force them to remain in Burkha. Then go all out and try to fuck hindu women?? Seriously a demented religion of sex starved monkeys…

If u feel I am wrong…look at Pakistan..leading in searches on sex with donkeys and monkeys!! It was documented in some English news channel a while back!! These pigs will fuck anything that has a whole …including a electrical socket!

A brilliantly crafted original story. A great effort. A totally credible and unexpected ending. Several threads woven together into a very satisfying conclusion.

While this was a long story, I loved it. It had so many different elements, and so many different depictions of sex. The best was the ending. Lots of little clues were thrown in the story and suddenly they all became important in the ending. Loved the way it was crafted together. Of course, wanked off several times to the story!

@massimo1605, lol. I will touch Summer of Indian Aunties sometime. Let's see. At the moment I am not motivated to continue that series.

@Anon, thanks. This is sort of a stand alone story.

@Anon, thanks.

@GnosticStranger, ah, let's see.

@Anon . I don't know.

@Anon, yes a master plan by the husband. A different type of sadistic, but yes.

@Anon, a weekend slut lol. I like that term.

@Anon, sigh. Looks like you have some hatred in you. Give me your wife.

@Matuateneira, thanks. I love specific praises like that.

@Anon, yes, a long story, but I also love it for those reasons. Different types of sex acts.

Please post the next part buddy sort of revenge gangbang where all 3 return and does everything in front of husband as revenge.

Awesome story. Please write similar story stories.

Can someone suggest similar stories like this, were wife is exposed/shared to other with or without consent?

@anon, would that be a revenge, given the wife is a slut like Reshmi?

@julius, you can read "Anna Succumbs to Neighbor's Cock". Or my Vidya series.

@spankedboy. It should be a revenge where their marriage is destroyed but our hero gets to keep the wife. The should come back and make her a public slut . That would be erotic revenge . All that happens behind closed curtains does not make her a public slut.

You need a sequel to this! A woman like her doesn't stop after one incident!

@anon - a revenge sequel. Hmm.. interesting.

@anon - yes, I originally planned this as a one off.

You must write a story of Mrs Swati!

There must be a sequel for this story! Reshmi cannot remain 'quiet' for too long!

@anon . Thanks for the interest. Though I am not sure a story of Mrs. Swati is warranted, the summary is given here .

@anon such a woman usually isn't.

We were a group of 8 couples, and it was planned that we shall have at least one drink party every week in a good hotel. After two months, three wives invented a great idea, which took us some time to convince the other five wives. We couples were friends for over two years, so we had idea about every individual's liking or not liking for others. We added one more novel idea of exploring each individual's positive feelings for opposite sex outside the group. We wanted to ensure that the plan was a success, so took every precaution, especially the reaction of individuals outside our group to make completely sure that they liked to have fun together. To start with we chose to experiment the formula on the three wives, who had designed and planned it. We announced that one additional room will be booked in the same hotel, for the next night, but on different floor ,where we were holding the party, to let the wife, if any, to go and rest, if she was tipsy or uncomfortable.

I was chosen to go first, despite my reservations. I was hesitant to reveal that I was having a secret affair with a Muslim guy, DANISH, much older to my 27 years; he was 45 year old. Danish was contacted and asked to book a room for one night to be spent with me, after checking that the hotel was suited me for that night.

We all met where the party was to be held by 7 pm. Around 8,30 p.m., the wives shifted with their drinks to the additional room, and the men stayed on in the party room. I was given a green signal to leave for the hotel booked by Danish, and never to let him find out about our party or the hotel, we are having the party. I was instructed to be back to the party hotel by 8 or 8.30 a.m.

I hurried to join my lover, DANISH, dreaming about his fat 8.5 inch long cock drilling my 'tight' (for DANISH) pussy. He picked me up as soon as he opened the door to the hotel room booked by DANISH in another hotel. He complained that one night was too short a period for loving me. We got into bed and started loving within five minutes after hurriedly undressing ourselves.

The next morning I reached around 9 a.m. back to our party hotel. All the women complained that I would have spoiled the game on the first time itself, by returning late to the party hotel. I had to explain that Danish had filled my pussy twice, but insisted on anal and oral with my swallowing his cum. I knew anal would not finish in such a short time, so gave him oral till he had flooded my mouth, and I had swallowed iit all. I had to assure him to meet in the day to satisfy his hunger, to be able to reach the party hotel........ Arti .....

Arti, thanks for the comment.

This is almost the little revenge loving wives story! Beautiful couple where they care for each other. Wife is allowed to enjoy her self and husband gets revenge on her lovers. A bit long but loved the twist.

Do you have plans for a sequel?

@anon thanks for the comment. Yes it is a bit long but I think it's ok.

@anon, no plans for a sequel to this.

Will the friends find out who betrayed them? What happens next? Such an epic story deserves an epic sequel. Don't you think?

Hi @anon. At the moment I have no plans for the sequel. I leave it to your imagination!

Born slut no remorse fuck,no one control let loose fucks them all because husband fantasy she says ,she nicely played her husband cheating him ,

Could be.

Akram and Nahid seem to be smart. At some point they will put two and two together. Can we have a sequel please. Did Arun's revenge take place? Author is not clear.

@anon thanks for the comment.

A sequel is highly unlikely for this one off story.

It's a long story but very good one. Every page was wankable and there was epic twist in end also. Still story could be slightly shorter.

I think you should write shorter but many more stories. That way there is no big gap between the times you post the storys.

@anon thanks for the comment. I have been thinking about writing shorter installments.