All Comments on 'The Huntsman and the Nix Ch. 02-03'

Gripping as always!! And lol doing it in front of the beast. Nice work 😆

Aargh! I hate it (love it!) when you do that! Page after page of tightly coiled emotion leading me higher and higher, until suddenly you toss me off that familiar evil cliff of which you are so fond, and I land, splat! back in this mundane world of ours. Sigh . . .

Thank you, anyway, for sharing your talents with us.

Love the writing. There is a part where she asks when he is going to fuck her, but they already had sex at that point. Still a great chapter

Loved it! Can’t wait to see how they get out of this.

For those of us with dogs we know what an audience can be like. Having sex in front of a monster brings things to an entirely different level of exhibitionism. That magic bag of tricks Sutter has seems to be bottomless. Are there any snazzy weapons in it?

You create the best tension between your characters. I also really enjoy your descriptive sex scenes. They're so vivid. My mind can see it playing out. HOT!

Martial arts training as seduction is so hot. I love how he subtly plays with her, leading her further and further into his desires.

This is a great story, thank you. I look forward to reading your other works.

Excellent so far... But as anon pointed out? Might check editing/writing. She does ask about sex after they've already had it.

Looking forward to the rest!

Really excellent. I got lost with some of the training moves (where he was, where she was), but the story and the chemistry is great. I like that Sutter isnt some moral hero. And to answer jra13, I believe Isobet was asking why he hadnt initiated sex again.

Nice one