All Comments on 'The Hypnotherapist - Black FDom Pt. 01'

This story needs more chapters, please write more about Claudia and the black women in her life now.

Grammar and punctuation is important. An editor or second set of eyes would really help. The story line is good, but it is a tough read the way it is written.

To take over the company, Tasha can have her boyfriend seduce Marie and turn her into a slut for black cock who will ignore business to the smiles of Tasha who will get a power of attorney to force Marie to surrender all her assets to her, making her the owner of the business.

Tasha will persuade Claudia to bring her mother in for a free session in which Claudia will have the mother learn how to properly suck BBC while liberating her daughter to become a full fledged slut to both black men and women. The mother will sign over her share of the family business, divorce husband and encourage daughters to be slits like Claudia.

i love the way it is going, an editor will help, with the next chapters. hint hint. write on

Good story, keep the chapters coming.

Loved it I want more