by sltmomcnt
Whoa. What can I say? It hurt just trying to read this shite. Terrible grammar, horrific punctuation and spacing. I read this "work" after reading someone else's comment, and they were dead right. This is suck-tacular.
Please , please, please consider this your allotted 15 minutes of fame and in the words of George Burns, "Say goodnight Gracie."
It seemed a promising concept from the title. I'm very glad I read the comments first, so I could be prepared for just how bad of an experience I was in for. I don't think I made it quite halfway before I'd read more than enough. I give it a zero only because there is nothing lower.
wow this story was absolutely horrible..it made no sense wat so ever
man you fucking kill it making his ex a lesbian perevert you suck you kill this story from the beinning
I couldn't help but get right into this!! It was fucking horrible, but then, I couldn't stop laughing. I know I may have issues here, but I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!