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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

love it

GrantLeeStoneGrantLeeStone9 months ago

This is a lovely fantasy Satvik. Sexy. Loving. Kind. Sexy. It need DIALOG! Do not talk in generalities. Not when you are being so specific about the sex. Dialog reads faster than prose and will make your story both longer, but seem shorter. 5🌟

I will reread this and imagine my first gay experience with someone as sweet & sexy as you, Sir!

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