by Sage_of_the_Forlorn_Path
You keep on coming with these fantastic chapters, truly a masterpiece. Bravo!
The story keeps growing. Nice shift in pace and growth in characters. Continuing to look forward to next chapter. Loved the educational section, should be more widely taught in real world.
You certainly can spin a tale, and get the imagination flowing. Your way with words is very interesting and quite enjoyable. Keep up the wonderful tale of the misplaced wanderer.
Nic
Trouble like 🐝 nest stir up. And everybody get STING.
The "deal" with commandant Ford will have far reaching consequences. Intriguing ....
Great story. Umpteenth now has become the figure of around 7000 :)
Interesting twist could be that he was present at the time or perhaps was the subject of...., but I don't think you will go there.
Great story teller. I wonder though what the writers background is to write a story like this?
Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next chapters.
Great stories make you cry or laugh out loud... they surprise you. Sex Ed in medieval world? in a Literotica story? Whoa! You continue to surprise and delight us. PEOPLE! Are you not entertained? : )
I really liked your new chapter on XNXX. My one request is that you find good synonyms to "select" and "script" for that site, as they censor those words (I assume out of arbitrary code execution paranoia) and out breaks up the flow of the story.
Otherwise, I'm loving where this is going. Thank you.
-UnknownZ
A chapter that has dark, funny, informative, introspective, emotional, and yet still flows so well that I can’t help reading the next page? Yep, this is that chapter. Definitely one of, if not the best story on Lit.
How on earth several pages of sexual education could be turned into a can’t put down chapter I’ll never know. Just brilliant. Again. This author is right up there with AspenEssling!!
funny as hell....love it. Twist them up and tie the knot and let them hang wow
I got work in 4 hours and I can't stop reading your creative masterpiece...Thank you for making me feel something resembling excitement again
Dear Author : Please put a disclaimer that you might lose sleep, the story is that good
Noah is a rogue in more than one sense of the word! Having women look at you that way is one of the best things in the world.