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"I feel what I feel, and there is no point explaining or defending it, but it's nice to finally get to tell these stories. Every time I try, people assume they're either fictitious or delusional. You all want to hear another one?"
"I think it's time for us to go to sleep now," said Orville hurriedly, with all the elves agreeing.
"Very well, I'll tell you more tomorrow," said Noah, slightly dejected. "Sleep tight, everyone."
No one did.
Please comment! Tell me your thoughts!
- COMMENTS
DigitalDreamer4 months agoYeah, Noah's bedtime stories are like "WTF, man -- you chose that story?" He just can't help himself, he has started telling his life tales and he can't stop -- can't read the room anymore.
japassou7 months agoCool that his illusion magic can affect the sense of smell too (and I imagine taste as well, since the olfactory sense plays a role in taste). So he covers all the senses except touch. How many times has he saved Aithorn's life now? That elf owes him a few favors by now, which I'm sure will come in handy later.
Like the other commenter mentioned, going from dinosaurs to space stories in the same chapter was a lot of fun! The sense of wonder he imparted to the elves must have been breathtaking... until he talked about friendly fire so casually. Know your audience, dude! Noah could be using these stories to win people to his side, but instead he ends up alienating them when he reveals his nihilism/indifference to life. Valia can't be unaffected when she hears this; I'm anticipating more philosophy arguments between them.
Anonymous9 months agoDear anonymous troll.. if you offer useless criticism please be brave enough to create an account so that we can “clear” the air.
Hypocritically yours,
Anon
Anonymousover 1 year agoBrilliant story! Just read it all the way through and I love the world, plot, characters, magic system, all of it. Keep up the amazing work!
Anonymousover 1 year agoKeep plugging along, the journey sparks the imagination and I do so enjoy the thoughtful journey.
Anonymousover 1 year agoI've followed you for many years and a few different websites. You are an incredible writer. Please keep it up. You have some of the greatest stories I have ever read.
Anonymousover 1 year agoI think that a story should be consistent within the boundaries it sets. Ch 8 was a very good chapter, wherein some problems where elegantly solved, such as how Elisandra and Noah could come together, and how Valon could be found. This chapter was horrible. Just written for the amusement of the lovers of senseless violence i think. The ecology of this island is impossible: there are always many more prey animals than predators, whereas on this island every animal seems to be a predator. Species on islands are always smaller than the same species on an continent, not bigger. Assuming that in this world Newtons laws are still valid - a solar system is not possible without those laws -, it is impossible to harm someone with a spear thrown out of the water.
Sage of the forlorn path, i look forward to every new instalment of this story, but you have proven that you con do better, much better, than this ch 10.
muze1602over 1 year agoCan't put the story down. Great pace, interesting story lines. Really enjoying it.
