All Comments on 'The Inn Ch. 02'

thankyou for the effort you put into writing, it is both inspirational and thought provoking how you have planted the protagonist in this setting , and i am looking forward to reading how he progresses through his journey.

Be nice to have seen more of the story as well as the sex.

@Anonymous (just a anonymous): Simon is definitely in for a journey! I hope you like where it takes him ...

@Anonymous (Be nice to have seen ...): I usually try to make sure the sex is an integral part of the story, so I'll go back and see how I might have missed that target in this one. My goal as an author is for the sex to be gratifying, but not gratuitous.

I'm definitely not sure what's next, but it's been entertaining thus far :)

Jason

I love some of the witty remarks/comments so far. Having Simon jerk off to a random middle-aged guy having sex with Leyna was far from arousing though.

@JasonRTaylor:

I hope the whole thing ended up entertaining you as much!

@striker24:

Simon's got some issues with repression, though, or he wouldn't have invented this world in the first place!