All Comments on 'The Inquisitor's Judgement'

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Polly_DollyPolly_Dolly6 months ago

Very enjoyable The snot from Marilyn at their reunion was a nice touch.

DevinterDevinter6 months agoAuthor

@Polly_Dolly - Thank you for the comment. I had no idea the snot would be appreciated by a reader. Haha. But that's good to know. (I assume Marilyn was the autocorrect form for Matilde.)

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Fantastic!

DevinterDevinter4 months agoAuthor

Thank you kindly, Anonymous. This story is probably the one I spent the most time on out of my entire 'library'. I am quite pleased with how it turned out. The core idea could have been developed a bit deeper in fairness, but I have a tendency to focus on the loving connections between characters most of the time, and things can get a bit dramatic. But I think it works for this story.

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