All Comments on 'The Insatiable Virgin'

The terrible grammar was like hiring a brick wall every other sentence. One moment I'm trying to enjoy the story, and the next I'm needing to go back and reread something because it was literary equivalent of a speed bump. The story had a great premise however. But I have to say this. Two yearolds don't walk around introducing themselves. Please get an editor. There are tons of them here on Literotica willing to help you.

Rather ironic I suppose.