All Comments on 'The Inseminator, Day at the Office'

I realize that this story is a wonderful spoof. However, I find it interesting thay you are a woman. I love the thought of fucking and impregnating a woman. I find that very sexy, even if it doesn't happen. Many women today seem to be concerned about being "in control of their bodies." I like fucking, but I love to fuck and breed a baby.

Nookiehunter

I'm so freaking jealous of your character! Can't wait to see the next installment. Keep up the good work.

an editor

includes a typo, and there are repeated grammar and spelling errors, its difficult to get into a story. The story line is mildly amusing.

Awesome story. I really enjoyed your thoughts and story development. You do need an editor though for some minor spelling and grammar problems. Keep up the great work. You will be a great writer with a little help. Cant wait to read more.

an editor could've made a world of difference. how many times can you type "than" when you really mean "then"?