by elsol
There's nothing better than a story that doesn't answer all the questions. You've built a fascinating world that lures the reader in. Please keep this one coming...I love a good post-Apocalyptic vision.
A very interesting story. Reminiscent of "The Book" in it's development, but perhaps a little light in the sex department. A very well written piece of fiction.
I've been looking for a story like this for ages. Very sexy mind control plot with what looks like the potential for some real character development.
This reminds me a lot of another story I read called "Camp: the Ronald Chaffrey Story," except you have a more mature writing style.
I especially liked how you have to slowly piece together what has happedened as the story goes on.
Really looking forward to this one. Your writing reminds me of John Brunner - and I can't think of many greater compliments.
I hate the thought of forced...anything, actually.
But this story gets past my issues there by being somehow brilliant.