All Comments on 'The Institute Stories Set 01'

by elsol

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AriosoAriosoabout 19 years ago
Very Wow

There's nothing better than a story that doesn't answer all the questions. You've built a fascinating world that lures the reader in. Please keep this one coming...I love a good post-Apocalyptic vision.

msboy8msboy8almost 19 years ago
Interesting Read

A little troubling, but not too much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Finally a well written erotic story..

A very interesting story. Reminiscent of "The Book" in it's development, but perhaps a little light in the sex department. A very well written piece of fiction.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wow

Quite good, i'm sorry to say that I was more than a little confused.

HamletinChainsHamletinChainsover 12 years ago
Just great

I've been looking for a story like this for ages. Very sexy mind control plot with what looks like the potential for some real character development.

This reminds me a lot of another story I read called "Camp: the Ronald Chaffrey Story," except you have a more mature writing style.

I especially liked how you have to slowly piece together what has happedened as the story goes on.

Stakhanov01Stakhanov01over 11 years ago
Terrific opening chapter

Really looking forward to this one. Your writing reminds me of John Brunner - and I can't think of many greater compliments.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

I hate the thought of forced...anything, actually.

But this story gets past my issues there by being somehow brilliant.

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