All Comments on 'The Intern: Anal Deep DP'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

re 'quadrilogy '

Remember that 'The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy' is a trilogy in four parts!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I lost track - where did Mary and Joey come from or go to?

great lovergreat loverabout 2 years ago

Ryan changed to Joey?

Thunderbelly86Thunderbelly86about 2 years ago

Great story. Can't wait for the finale.

One critique. Who is Joey that shows up halfway through the sex on page 2?

old_riderold_riderabout 2 years ago

WOW!!! Great chapter. Like others have said there is some confusion about names.

OzeminotaurOzeminotaurabout 2 years ago

I love this but where did the extra people come from

legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesabout 2 years ago

I loved it when Judy quacked! I guess it was "Fuck a duck day"! Only 4 stars because of the supposedly edited story. What kind of editor misses Ryan becoming Joey? And Judy should have quaked in orgasm instead of quacking. But it did "quack" me up!

SonatatreSonatatreabout 2 years ago

Mostly a hot story, but the editing was not good enough. You usually have very clean stories, but this time that part fell flat. Maybe change the editor you used for this story to someone else?

Looking forward to the last part, hoping it will have as glorious writing

tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey2110about 2 years ago

Can't wait to see how Frank reacts to the change in Judy. I predict that he will be really happy. I have really loved this series so far.

slafradslafradabout 2 years ago

Another great story. Love your work. More please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Long time reader of your many stories, but this one may be your very best, some editing glitches aside. Looking forward to your next chapter. Hopefully you won't lose interest as some writers do and co,e up with so,e newer kinks to maintain or even spice up the overall thrust of this very hot story.....

literoticmanliteroticmanabout 2 years ago

Great series. So when is the next one coming out?

SenorDomSenorDomover 1 year ago

The "Joey" appears fixed, now who is Frank? You mean Ralph?

Wonderful story line and fast-paced plot, thanks for the effort it takes to create these stories!

4chuckssite4chuckssite11 months ago

558. Although ass fucking is not my thing, this story is interesting, and I am ready for the final chapter so we can move on to more girl on girl action. Perhaps having a different proofreader would make reading these stories more enjoyable.

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I am a married woman who has a fetish for wearing nylons. My themes although I am not limited to them are: seduction, domination, humiliation, blackmail, lingerie,and submission. I write about my fantasies and will write stories based on other people's fantasies as well, ...