All Comments on 'The International Business Trip'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
LIKED THE STORY A LOT

and look forward to more about this pair.

palpalpalpalover 2 years ago

I have read hundreds of loving wife stories. The erotic thrill is more when

a) The husband is not involved.

b)The wife is actually a decent conservative woman who has not slept with anybody other than her husband.

c) There is no smoking, dancing , drinking which are distractions. ( it is ok if there is a one sentence reference t dancing and drinking events. Not getting drunk and so on.

d) The other man getting involved is a long time known decent happily married person ( without a ladies man tag or skirt chaser tag) ;could be boss ( this could be most realistic), husband's friend, husband's boss, a distant relative.

e) the narration is by the woman in first person.

f) No unnecessary obsession with size.

g) The narration involves detailed account of innuendos, double entendres, response of her body and mind for each of the small incidents, words, sentences, touches, gestures, foreplay, penetration, etc

h) there is long pursuit and initial reluctance is dismantled inch by inch

i) the story should be at least 5-6 pages or two- three parts.

i)AND LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST,EACH MOMENT THERE SHOULD BE ANTICIPATION, AND UNPREDICTABILITY.

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