All Comments on 'The Interracial Blood Siblings'

Contrived plot, to spew forth another pile of lies and mythology about nonexistent 'BBC' again. Pathetic.

"1.5 years later..." .

Really?

Would a real author write like that?

As this appears to be your first story. I would recommend an editor. For the storyline is okay, but the grammer needs some help. It is my belief English is not your first language. Hope you will write more but have that editor to improve the story flow.

Your topic is new and fresh but you need to improve in story writing.

You have a good imagination but your actual writing skills suck. Community Colleges will frequently offer remedial and/or high school level writing classes for free. Take one before you come back to see us. You have a lot to learn beyond just sentence structure and grammar.

I enjoyed the story,had me thinking about me and my young sister,we fucked every chance we had,never got caught by our parents

Great story, I am guessing that English is not your first language, but either way it is a good read.