by Belegon
Will you continue?
It seems to hang in the air, lots of unfinished threads...
Still I loved it!
John/Namizujs
Budapest
A very interesting beginning - and lots of unanswered questions for following up... hope to see more soon!
(More of what? I'll leave that up to you ;) )
I enjoyed every word. Very entertaining, Bel. *kisses* ~Imp
Interesting story. Amusing characters and a nice twist at the end.
Gotta love those fiery redheads.
The ending seemed abrupt though.
Your style is very similar to the famous author,and that is not faint praise
time travel!!! i had no idea but was very excited to read this. please continue as i now need to know how this story evolves.
*hugs*
v~
There's a lot contained in this one, short piece. I can see where it could easily develop into something longer and more involved. I found myself wanting to know more details but feel that would be impossible in the short amount of space allowed for a "short story". Good job working within the constraints of short fiction.
Liked the story but I must ask have you ever heard a Scottish person talk?
Sounds like the ruins of the tower were more likely a fairy ring, and the captain spent time under the hill!