by Belegon
Sounds like the ruins of the tower were more likely a fairy ring, and the captain spent time under the hill!
Liked the story but I must ask have you ever heard a Scottish person talk?
There's a lot contained in this one, short piece. I can see where it could easily develop into something longer and more involved. I found myself wanting to know more details but feel that would be impossible in the short amount of space allowed for a "short story". Good job working within the constraints of short fiction.
time travel!!! i had no idea but was very excited to read this. please continue as i now need to know how this story evolves.
*hugs*
v~
Your style is very similar to the famous author,and that is not faint praise
Interesting story. Amusing characters and a nice twist at the end.
Gotta love those fiery redheads.
The ending seemed abrupt though.
I enjoyed every word. Very entertaining, Bel. *kisses* ~Imp
A very interesting beginning - and lots of unanswered questions for following up... hope to see more soon!
(More of what? I'll leave that up to you ;) )
Will you continue?
It seems to hang in the air, lots of unfinished threads...
Still I loved it!
John/Namizujs
Budapest