All Comments on 'The Intersection of Past & Present'

Every cheated on man's wet dream. A few holes in the story but I can overlook them for the final ending.

Read it again and it is still my favorite revenge story ever! He didn't waste time. He was thorough, devious, and very effective. I love it!

You are a correct man, I always believe in burning a cheating wife. Thumbs up for you.👍

Another great, fully justified, scorched earth revenge on a cheating wife. Another author with some good stuff who quit too soon.

I really Liked this. Keep on writing .. 5 Stars From Me

Life's a bitch and then you divorce one

This story is based on a cheating wife...again we see what's happening to the husband...but what happened to her when the shit hit the fan...this author is like so many others...no balls...her cheating is the story here...and seeing what she went through...from the moment she was served divorce papers to the end of the divorce in not important to the reader here....me...this is another unfinished story.........

While pathetic little revenge fantasies like this give all the He-Man Woman Haters something to jerk off to, what happens in real life if you try this kind of thing is poverty and prison.

If you actually enjoyed reading this, get help.

Great story loved it

Scores 5/5

This story was a Good one what happened to the X was right She cheated and paid the price for Her actions Wish I could say the same for my Life being in now going on a 35 year sexless life but in mine there is no other Guy My wife just because of having a Problem with the Birth of our son decided there would be no more sex. When we got married or just before we said I do's I told her only one way out of this marriage and that was for one of Us would have to die and I am a Man of my word. to bad for me I guess!

This is a perfect little revenge fantasy, and most of the anonymous whiners hate it. That makes it even better.

Well the pea brains sure loved this ridiculously over the top story.

With no semblance of reality what would have been a decent story really ends up appealing to the knuckle draggers who still think women should be treated like cavewomen by cavemen.

best revenge is living life well

A very good read!

QUITE THE FAIRY TALE!!!

such a funny funny funny little fairy tale....

amusing bullshit at first, but then just went off the rails stupid.

Second read. I love it.

Average

Now he is an in charge guy

Why marry her when you didn't want accountant etc.?!

As retired CPA I always didn't like it but originally chose it as liked numbers etc

Didn't like office politics and games you were expected to play.

Wow this has got to be the stupidest fucking revenge story ever lose everything instead of what exactly obviously this author is a fucking MORON

BTB or Reconciliation (if justified) is all good. But this is an awful, poorly written, unbelievable premise and honestly, the judge can (in Calif at least) and would order an amount to be paid in child support and alimony based on his earning potential as a CPA. Involuntary servitude? Yep, tough shit says the judge and if he refuses, off he goes to jail for contempt. And what's the divorcee, Stephanie, living on? Is she independently wealthy or what? 1*

Another sad jerkoff revenge fantasy. Write what you know.

Great story, the divorce laws really screw the man. A prenup is mandatory in todays world!

interesting, well-written, but rather much of a "tale well-told" by rote. But thanks for sharing your creative imagination. Keep writing.

MLJ

3 stars - just a BTB story - nothing more

When my wife of 10 years and I split she was awarded half of our car. I cut it in half and had a friend of mine dump the back half on her drive. There was no comeback. 5*

so stupid

That's the way a-ha a-ha I like it a-ha a-ha.

Stupid exhusband criminal activity will be easily found out The lookalike bimbo will sing and a good lawyer will reverse the sale of the house Exhusband will have to bear all expenses including all of wifes assets and he will go to prison for 10 years sharing a cell with Bubba who will use him every night when he is not breaking his bones. When exhusband gets out he will liable for all missed spousal payments and he will be paying forever in his pathetic life

@nixrox

3 stars - just a BTB story - nothing more.

Its way more than you have posted here!

Amazing BTB. ROFLMAO the butthurt comments from man haters here are so heartwarming. Easy 5 stars for excellent (and surprisingly original for a short work) story.

5* for dealing with skanky Barb

Super great btb story... loved every paragraph... she got 110% of exactly what she deserved

A bit over the top, but that's OK. It entertained me for a few good minutes.

I liked it!

Author's been gone for nearly a decade, but hopefully other authors won't fall into the trap of spending the last paragraph breaking immersion and potentially insulting readers.

Great story. I liked how the MC did the stuff to his cheating wife. I liked how she got served on the cruise ship. 5 stars for a well done story.

GREAT story!!!

The children? Nice story about a psychopath, or was it a dream? Judges put men in jail for far less than this.

You know 5’9” is a common height for SEALS and other special operators. Very few 6’3” Seals or rangers.

The story is completely unreal because when he forged her signature through a woman who looked like her, he committed a crime that put him in prison and invalidated the sale.

Firstly, because it is very easy to prove that during the sale and signing of the contracts she was on a trip outside the country

Secondly, any calligraphy expert can easily prove that the signature is not hers

The wife does not need a lawyer to file a complaint of forgery of documents. All she has to do is inform the police of what happened, and the police will be the ones who will verify the validity of the allegation.

The whole story is based on wrong actions that are easy to detect

But in the end, she is an unfaithful wife, and he had to expose her in front of everyone who knew her and send her pictures to all relatives and friends so that she would be completely excluded from any social relationships.

He’s home on the range because the cheating bitch wanted some strange. *5 because it’s a BTB, nothing more.