All Comments on 'The Intersection of Past & Present'

He’s home on the range because the cheating bitch wanted some strange. *5 because it’s a BTB, nothing more.

The story is completely unreal because when he forged her signature through a woman who looked like her, he committed a crime that put him in prison and invalidated the sale.

Firstly, because it is very easy to prove that during the sale and signing of the contracts she was on a trip outside the country

Secondly, any calligraphy expert can easily prove that the signature is not hers

The wife does not need a lawyer to file a complaint of forgery of documents. All she has to do is inform the police of what happened, and the police will be the ones who will verify the validity of the allegation.

The whole story is based on wrong actions that are easy to detect

But in the end, she is an unfaithful wife, and he had to expose her in front of everyone who knew her and send her pictures to all relatives and friends so that she would be completely excluded from any social relationships.

You know 5’9” is a common height for SEALS and other special operators. Very few 6’3” Seals or rangers.

The children? Nice story about a psychopath, or was it a dream? Judges put men in jail for far less than this.

GREAT story!!!

Great story. I liked how the MC did the stuff to his cheating wife. I liked how she got served on the cruise ship. 5 stars for a well done story.

Author's been gone for nearly a decade, but hopefully other authors won't fall into the trap of spending the last paragraph breaking immersion and potentially insulting readers.

I liked it!

A bit over the top, but that's OK. It entertained me for a few good minutes.

Super great btb story... loved every paragraph... she got 110% of exactly what she deserved

5* for dealing with skanky Barb

Amazing BTB. ROFLMAO the butthurt comments from man haters here are so heartwarming. Easy 5 stars for excellent (and surprisingly original for a short work) story.

@nixrox

3 stars - just a BTB story - nothing more.

Its way more than you have posted here!

Stupid exhusband criminal activity will be easily found out The lookalike bimbo will sing and a good lawyer will reverse the sale of the house Exhusband will have to bear all expenses including all of wifes assets and he will go to prison for 10 years sharing a cell with Bubba who will use him every night when he is not breaking his bones. When exhusband gets out he will liable for all missed spousal payments and he will be paying forever in his pathetic life

That's the way a-ha a-ha I like it a-ha a-ha.

so stupid

When my wife of 10 years and I split she was awarded half of our car. I cut it in half and had a friend of mine dump the back half on her drive. There was no comeback. 5*

3 stars - just a BTB story - nothing more

interesting, well-written, but rather much of a "tale well-told" by rote. But thanks for sharing your creative imagination. Keep writing.

MLJ

Great story, the divorce laws really screw the man. A prenup is mandatory in todays world!

Another sad jerkoff revenge fantasy. Write what you know.

BTB or Reconciliation (if justified) is all good. But this is an awful, poorly written, unbelievable premise and honestly, the judge can (in Calif at least) and would order an amount to be paid in child support and alimony based on his earning potential as a CPA. Involuntary servitude? Yep, tough shit says the judge and if he refuses, off he goes to jail for contempt. And what's the divorcee, Stephanie, living on? Is she independently wealthy or what? 1*

Wow this has got to be the stupidest fucking revenge story ever lose everything instead of what exactly obviously this author is a fucking MORON

Average

Now he is an in charge guy

Why marry her when you didn't want accountant etc.?!

As retired CPA I always didn't like it but originally chose it as liked numbers etc

Didn't like office politics and games you were expected to play.

Second read. I love it.

amusing bullshit at first, but then just went off the rails stupid.

such a funny funny funny little fairy tale....

QUITE THE FAIRY TALE!!!

A very good read!

best revenge is living life well

Well the pea brains sure loved this ridiculously over the top story.

With no semblance of reality what would have been a decent story really ends up appealing to the knuckle draggers who still think women should be treated like cavewomen by cavemen.

This is a perfect little revenge fantasy, and most of the anonymous whiners hate it. That makes it even better.

This story was a Good one what happened to the X was right She cheated and paid the price for Her actions Wish I could say the same for my Life being in now going on a 35 year sexless life but in mine there is no other Guy My wife just because of having a Problem with the Birth of our son decided there would be no more sex. When we got married or just before we said I do's I told her only one way out of this marriage and that was for one of Us would have to die and I am a Man of my word. to bad for me I guess!

Great story loved it

Scores 5/5

While pathetic little revenge fantasies like this give all the He-Man Woman Haters something to jerk off to, what happens in real life if you try this kind of thing is poverty and prison.

If you actually enjoyed reading this, get help.

This story is based on a cheating wife...again we see what's happening to the husband...but what happened to her when the shit hit the fan...this author is like so many others...no balls...her cheating is the story here...and seeing what she went through...from the moment she was served divorce papers to the end of the divorce in not important to the reader here....me...this is another unfinished story.........

Life's a bitch and then you divorce one

I really Liked this. Keep on writing .. 5 Stars From Me

Another great, fully justified, scorched earth revenge on a cheating wife. Another author with some good stuff who quit too soon.

You are a correct man, I always believe in burning a cheating wife. Thumbs up for you.👍

Read it again and it is still my favorite revenge story ever! He didn't waste time. He was thorough, devious, and very effective. I love it!

Every cheated on man's wet dream. A few holes in the story but I can overlook them for the final ending.

I particularly like the wave from the jaunty sports car (in the girlfriends name of course)

This is a total burn on a.deserving cheating wife. After where she was served, why.would she ask for a reason?

Why pick holes in a wonderful revenge story? I guess your one of those forgivness at any cost freaks! Either that or a cuck loving worthless piece of shit!

Betrayal should be a capital offence, death by stoning or fire (the betrayed party gets to chose) for both the betrayers.

For me? Use the match!

Several flaws.How does his ex buddy know his Email address.How can he recognise the wife several years after he as seen a photo of her.Who can serve divorce papers on a ship.

I agree with some comments especially just _words

Never understand separate vacations!

Most couples have so little time together without stress from work kids etc that time together is necessary

Loved the cock cage

But what about punishment for sister she knew and colluded

4 stars

didnt move in with her slut of a sister?

I don't care how much a wife is complimented and chatted up by a man other than her husband. There is no way that that guy or any guy will ever get any married women to have sex with her except for one of two ways!

1. The guy rapes her!

2. The married women says yes!

That's it short and sweet. So when you really look at why the divorce rate is so high and married women get pregnant from having sex with a man other than their husband. Yep you got it. It's the women's fault every time.

We men are geared by nature to try and plant as much seed as we can. However it's totally up to a women married or not to let you plant that seed.

Really ladies, why get married if you can't keep your panties up! They get married so our dumbasses will support them and give them a base of operation while they change us into something we are not; and if we don't train well, then she'll go find someone else who she can train better. Oops!, she forgot to tell you about the other guy didn't she? Oh well, hopefully you'll find out one day and burn her to the ground like this guy did. Great job by the way!

LOVED The story, the writing, and the whole damn concept I Loved it 5* Thank You.

It's great to read a story that doesn't make the reader want to leave the planet!

Every time I read that line "You hate me that much?" I have to laugh. Oh, hell yes I do!

This is badly cooked plot. I can add one more thing - amazing how almost every author on LW finds a way to introduce some rebound romance and the woman in that romance is always fantastic, honest, devoted ...

I agree with rubbish .Too many flaws in the story.No one works thirty hours for just room and board and if his wife didn't work where did the money for her own bank account come from.?

She got hosed! 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

And wife got off too easy. What is it about separate vacations married idiots do not understand?

Rubbish,how does someone recognise some one they have never met,from a photo they saw many years ago,people change over the years?.How come Carl knew John's Email address,how come John knew his wife's lover was called Studley and how did the divorce papers get sent to the ship,plus the fact is the cruise would have been over before the lawyer had drawn up the papers.As I said total rubbish.

Beautiful revenge, no violence, no death. Just a new life, and a sportscar.

Now this is the payback I would extract. Nice. And no violence either. Just all smarts used to do this.

It's offensive the judge actively tried to manipulate the custody outcome. As far as I know, the parents are merely meat and it's "all for the kids."

But at his age, his life romantically is over, according to some people, and living life as a flesh being is lame, so just pull a JimBob44 Inferno and burn everything down, go to jail, fuck everything, fuck yo couch, wife.

write your story your way.

How does someone get served divorce papers on a cruise ship ,and no one with two kids would work for just board and lodgings.

It is overrated. Most people see it black and white, 1* or 5*. I see it as mediocre, but not offensive. It's too short, therefore has to be too perfect to fit the plot in that length, and it's not very amusing. Well, the legal stuff pulled IS offensive. Abusing the legal system and fraud to get one over on somebody is not right, and I harbor a nuclear submarine and aircraft carrier of disgust at it even being used in a story.

@ anon 11/20/16. ha ha your wifes bull is a brit isnt he? lol. still we brits are gents, bet he and wifey bought you a blow up to take the edge off.

Carl is not going to recognise his wife never having never met her and only seeing her in a photo many years ago.Also how did Carl manage to find an Email address for John and how could John Email divorce papers to Carl.Finally John would not sell the house without finding some where to live first,he had two children to look after.

A fun fantasy flash story but a bit on the shallow side. Thankfully you did this in a bit over one page, about what it should merit.

Good ol suspension of disbelief.

ELIMINATE THEN 95 PER CENT OF STORIES ON LITEROTICA

Stories such as this one are so obviously meant to provide a good chuckle.

Both in reading of the story

Then in laughing at the incensed comments

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Keep writing, the cucks will just have to get their fag stories from the UK as usual..... I am sure Luedon and MattUK along with Britease will hate this so it must be good...

Keep writing, my friend!

Stop writing, asshole!

...and I did. Whole-heartedly.

I know that none of that is the real world, but you know what? It should be.

Without the unfair and unbalanced strength of the laws that clearly disadvantage men, life would be a lot simpler, a lot safer and a lot more just.

How the fuck can anybody agree with the notion of a no-fault divorce, if one of the two is thoroughly at fault? The very idea of a no-fault divorce makes a mockery of the wedding vows (promises and a contract, which in any other partnership would be legally binding), laughs at the couple, and pisses on many marriages. If many men realized what it truly implied, then they would probably lose hope,and lose all confidence that they were safe and secure in the world that they are working hard to build.

And think about it... if it is 'no fault', then it should also follow, that the pain should be shared. Fuck all of the advantage going to the woman, especially when she usually gets to have the love of the kids around the whole time.

It's not a wonder that 40%of marriages end in the trash can.

Sure, this was a fun fantasy, and guess what? I was along for the ride, all the way. All the cucks will hate it, so it has to be good.

Thanks for the fun read. full points from me.

Real estate fraud is not a civil matter that the wife retains an attorney to solve, it is a criminal matter that the police and District Attorney pursue. Taking his wife's name off the trust deed with intent to defraud by employing a fake wife, while the real one is provably out of town on a cruise, is grand larceny. That is a serious felony, and will put the poor husband in prison for some amount of time, saddle him with a criminal record that will diminish his future employment prospects, and prevent him from gaining custody of his children.

Instead of a triumphant saga of one man's successful campaign against a cheating wife who has metaphorically cut off his virtual penis, we have a story of a fool who has set burned his life to the ground, and will have nothing to show for it but his shining stupidity.

I realize that the bitch-burners around here have, at best, a tenuous grasp on reality. They seem to be sufficiently pleased with a tale if a woman is tied to a stake and set on fire, but not everyone who reads here is a mouth-breathing moron.

You need to make your story at least somewhat believable, unless your target audience is 15 year-old boys who have never lived on their own or had a relationship with an adult woman. Or, perhaps, you are writing this for emotionally-stunted, mentally-challenged losers who are entertained by the pain of those weaker than themselves. Either way, this story is badly thought out, and even more poorly written.

One *.

Nice palate cleanser ! Got the God awful taste of those 9 stinkers posted on LW on this Friday the 13th !

5 Glorious *' s

This is so far off the wall it's just stupid.

If you've been through the courts in a divorce you know this is a work of fiction. However, we definitely can fantasize, while reading a work of fiction in exploring our imagination on what I'd like to see happen. In reality, it seems to never happen but we need our fantasies to help with the cold hard realities life sometimes hands our way. This author captured those fantasies in a well written condensed story which I felt deserved a five stars rating. Thank you for your efforts.

Maybe a month to test his resolve. However, the whole family will be on welfare and he would be in jail! I have a hard time believing it would go on long. His way is the right way.

No Court gives him custody of the kids. None. And most Courts would have assigned alimony and child support to him and told him to get a job. He wants to go to jail for contempt? Really? He wants to spend all the years in jail before his kids get to be 18? And maybe longer since he can't discharge what he owed her for the back child support or alimony thru bankruptcy. Seems like a whole life time in jail. And when he gets out with a criminal record what type of job would he be able to get that would pay him a decent wage? So to avoid the Courts screwing him, he ruins his life. Smart man.

The cheating whore got what she deserved. Nothing and no one. Excellent.

who'll or how to stop the rain. TK U MLJ LV NV

Cuck wannabe much? You're such a Whiner.

Loved this story. finally a cuckold with a back bone. revenge can be sooooo sweet. This guy did what he felt he had to do and did it well. Again loved the story. GREAT JOB.

All you haters out there-what a plan. And to carry it out with such clarity. Way to go. Way to go. Please give us another one like this. If more writers would do this, the cuckold revolting stories wouldn't be on here now would they? Think about it-would you rather sit and read about some wife fucking someone she shouldn't be or a man truly standing up for what he believes in-even if a little bit far fetched.

Unbelievable legal fairy tales, the timing from detection to divorce is crap, his criminal actions impossible to do. So this story is only ment for BTB fans - and no one else. 1*

Where's the angst? Where's the agony? Where's the believability? Mostly where's the moment of truth? Why didn't he wait till she got home and query her about her vacation? Where was the exposure of her infidelity?

How does he know that his new woman "doesn't have an unfaithful bone in her body"? He never caught on to Barb, he had to have a friend stumble on to her. This guy is not to swift. Cheaters are liars, liars get used to lying and tend to lie about more than just cheating. Lies are contradictions, they are the difference between word and reality. In a very sort period of time they show themselves. Liars are not bright people, either are those that fall for them for long.

was the fact that the one who should have been punished, was. In all of the stories where the wife gets away scott free because the husband "just can't bring himself to punish or hit a woman" because he loves her or she's the mother of his kids, etc. Well, she was the one who promised him, not the lover. So, good job on this story.

That how a cheating spouse must be treated..No excuse for cheating...

Let me repeat *****

Great read. Nice to see a husband with some balls and didn't need to get violent to get his. The Cunts and sissy faggots will be crying about this one and that makes it even better.

This should be under the category " Fantasy Crap " that's all it is, fiction doesn't even cover it but maybe shit does.

I like the story over all, the writing was very good and it moved along at a good pace. I've written a similar story where the husband gets revenge but it doesn't cost him quiet as much. It always pissed me off that in a no fault state the wife will get 50% of their assets even if she is the reason for breaking up the marriage.

...and he got what he wanted. I love a happy ending. To bad the sister got away scott free for being a co-conspirator.

Since I read for entertainment and this really entertained me- FIVE STARS. Sure, she could have (maybe) got the place back but there would be no gain, with that $350,000 mortgage on a $400,000 piece of property, by the time she paid a lawyer she would have gained almost nothing, it would have taken a long time etc. She is lucky he did not put the pictures on the internet (I would have). Surely she still looks pretty good and can snare an older man so she won't have to work long. Since it is just a STORY don't get all bent out of shape. Good story, thank you for writing, author.

I gave you a 5.

I would have liked a little more of payback to the sister and lover, but understand that as a flash story, you didn't have time.

I'll be looking forward to more of your stories.

Enjoyed the story but one thing was actually missing, it's too bad you couldn't give the sister a slap upside the head too for helping and participating.

I do not mind some BTB stories. In this case the burning is not too off the wall but... writers style does not lend itself to fantasy but that is what this is. Only in an alternative reality could he do what he did and not wind up in jail. I mean it is not even hard to put him there. Too many holes in the explanations. The fraud with the house. The forging of the signature. The cliche' of Vegas which I am thoroughly sick of as it shows limited creativity. Besides that the protagonist is pretty cavalier in his attitude toward the kids and the effect of not seeing their mother any longer. And, yes research shows that kind of shit does have a tremendous and negative outcome. OK fantasy. Poor stories.

Well, wife===Burn Bitch Burn, Payback is a bitch.

"at the end of the day" this story was a fun read.

Now that was a situation handled properly. A fun read. Thanks

A wonderful revenge indeed. A woman after having 2 beautiful

children continue her affair is no at all acceptable. The best part

is Stephanie gave support to the children and He got the future

with Her. Great story.Thanks.

...of RETRIBUTION! Yes! I really got off on this story, thank Q_L_P!

LeFrog