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by Texguy84

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I don't like the ending, the rest was very good, but the deaths make it a real time ruiner

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I concur. It was plenty fun until the nuke stuff. It's often far more enthralling to leave a bit of mystery to it all, leave the reader wondering what the hell the tentacles even were.

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