All Comments on 'The Invisible Hand Pt. 04'

Hi, have just now found your story and read all four parts.

Nice new ways of excerting surveillance and control.

A sinister and scary Master though having a big heart.

Good story!

Grey Master.

and releasing the final part of your last story. I am also busy and glad to find part 4 this weekend, when returning from work. I found it a round story and like the remote control idea as a great new technical way of ganing control. Can't await what kinky ideas You present next - great job - please continue - JtL

I keep coming back and reading this story and I love the control aspect so much and would love to read more about these characters maybe a spin off with more information about the beginning of their relationship and introducing the chastity belt

Answer to "More please somehow".

Thanks for your comment, it means a lot. Unfortunately, I wouldn't know how to continue this story, as I feel I have said what I wanted to say. Nadia is hungry now, after all, and that was the destination meant for her journey.

I do have another story in mind about this topic, which was actually the one that has inspired "the Invisible Hand", but I deemed it waaaay too weird for this site. Religion (and my aversion to it) is a major theme and the demon there is a woman who got herself horn implants (not the ones you can actually get nowadays, a more sci-fi-ish version that looks like proper horns). I doubt it's what you're after.

Check out shyexhibitionist's and absolutist's work (for the latter, make sure you also go on their deviantArt profile), they've got stories that may titillate your palate.

That story does sound interesting actually and I’ll check out what you recommend I was thinking maybe the demons backstory like maybe previous subs he had or his discovery of what he wanted but if you can’t see a story about that it’s all good

God I love this story it’s one of my top 2

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

i LOVE this story! I usually get bored with multiple part stories, but the development and everything that could have happened enthralled me. You're simply brilliant, and I will definitely be coming back.

Thank you very much for taking me on your journey!

Such creativity!