by inkytaur
Disappointed. I lost all interest the moment he transformed. Male centaurs are a major turn off.
I wish he had stayed human. Would have made the story better.
Sweet story. A little difficult to picture some of their actions in my mind since I haven't been around horses (or centaurs!) much. I liked Hyla a lot. A goddess who rules over a small island, doesn't mind that her temple appears to be in ruins, advertises in newspapers to get more residents - she is very amusing.