All Comments on 'The Island'

It was TOTALLY erotic! I was hard from the moment they first touched each other. First times are the best.

Please? The kissing wasn't my thing, but the rest of the story was!

I agree, very erotic, the kissing, touching and U could almost feel that hot cock between Ur lips for the first time, something U have been lusting for and the powerful emotain that sweeps Ur body when U realize U love it. Brought back sweet memories. What happens when they go back to the island???

You know where the story is going, and that builds the excitement because you don't know exactly how the story will get there. One of the best I've read in a while. I'm enjoying this "fresh meat.".

I love the story. I think it would be great to have more about Rob and Brian as it felt like it could be a really hot love story.

Good story but the punctuation was terrible making it hard to read.