All Comments on 'The Island Ch. 01'

If this garbage rates a two I'll be amazed. The content was ridiculous and boilerplate. No imagination on your part, nothing more than another contrived black on white woman horseshit story. Then there's the grammar, or shall I say, lack thereof? Do you know what a paragraph is? You wasted the opportunity to post a story that was interesting and erotic. Your pen name will be the next most ignore. 1*

Same old same old nothing new nothing erotic. Don't write anymore BS.

Donna needs to forget hubby and have some fun with the natives.

Loved the story. Can’t wait for Part 2.

total crap...

I enjoyed it. Hope you write more.

need part 2

More Please!!!