All Comments on 'The Island Ch. 01'

If the rest is like this give yourself a pat on the back!

If the rest is like this give yourself a pat on the back!

Unbelievable but great fun. More please

That was a Hot story hard to believe it was your first one on here .One hell of a job 100% enjoyed it .Great work hope to see more . Thanks for the story .

It sounds like the guys don't even need the drug. She seems to be approaching nympho status anyway. I'm thinking the use of her hands would be a plus except for the erotic duress part. Good job. Are mom and dad going to show up and join in the fun?

A little editing would help.

More please

I hope she hires some bikers with AIDS to assrape her brothers with an electric drill.

I couldn't Get through the first page. Any man that would treat a female in this manner should be shot with a ball of their own shit.

When you mix rape and incest you turn me off. I thought for a moment they would back off and untie her and she would take the lead but now it becomes rape. Anal rape is probably worse than vaginal as it is normally more painful.

So many offended comments. Do yall not realize this was a story? Personally i loved it and would love to read more of this story. Let the haters hate, you did great!

It's fantasy folks, enjoy! Frankly they should spank and paddle and whip and fuck her everyday. Teach that bitch some manners!

Rape. Zero stars.

she admitted an attraction and a fantasy about her brothers before it started. it seemed consentual in that sense to me. a definite fantasy of mine. ;)

i enjoyed it. thumbs up! cant wait for more!

Loved the erotic double penetration scene! Also enjoyed seeing one brother clean up for the other!

Can hurt so good.

Consensual 'rape'.

typos, misspellings, malapropisms, ...

however, talent and imagination is there...