All Comments on 'The Island Ch. 05'

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James_DuncanJames_Duncanover 1 year ago

Still loving this.

Ravey19Ravey19over 1 year ago

Lot of sex but there again this is Literotica. Slightly wish the story would move on a little more quickly but it's your story and I couldn't write anywhere near your standard. Love both your current stories.

LynchjimLynchjimover 1 year ago

Yep I too still am loving this story please keep em coming.

XacksonXacksonover 1 year ago

The only thing I don’t like is the forced removal of the mother and her kid. That would have made things waaay more interesting with how it’s all playing out.

bhojobhojoover 1 year ago

you and your stories are awesome also

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

fucking awesome

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Another excellent chapter. This story is going from strength to strength.

SensualSigmaSensualSigmaover 1 year ago

West side of the crater, no meeting them halfway... are they somehow unable to move? What caused the crater, an asteroid? Is the voice an alien one? Holy alien mind-jacks Batman!

Aussie1951Aussie1951over 1 year ago

Great story but it’s so frustrating to read. Your chapters are far too short for my liking and it’s getting to the stage where I’m bypassing all the sex to actually get to the storyline. still I gave you ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Update - 2nd May Thank you all for your wonderful support for my little writing hobby. My schedule has cleared up quite nicely for the foreseeable future, so I should be able to pump a few out a good few chapters before the summer when I will be taking a little break for my v...

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