All Comments on 'The Island Day 01'

by nad3536

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RecHikerRecHikerover 8 years ago
Great 1st

Thanks for sharing your story. It was a great read and I can't wait for day 2.

RecHiker

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I want more.

great story and cant wait for the rest of this sexy story

netowlnetowlover 8 years ago
Good story

I can't wait for day two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Fun in the sun!

Excellent - Looking fwd to more days of fun in the sun!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
What great day in the sun and in the woman.

I've had days like this with my wife. Awesome.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Outstanding Rendezvous

Well written and erotic. I hope you are writing more, as you are very creative in telling such a sensual story. Wow, hot does not do it justice A favorite fantasy, if only it could be experienced....thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
stroke not erotica

like many here, you seem to think that graphical physical sex equates to erotica. It doesn't!

Anonymous
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