All Comments on 'The Island - Lara's Day 01'

I'd just like to apologize for some mistakes made in the beginning of the story - I decided to change the name of one of the characters (Sasha) mid-story, but didn't follow up on it as thoroughly as was intended, so the "old" name (Iva) was left there in a couple of places. Hope you don't hold it against me. I'll be more careful in my future submissions.

Really looking forward to reading more of it

Well done.