All Comments on 'The Island of Three Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Tease

Literal cliff hanger.....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Love these!

This series is awesome so far! I gotta say I think I like Sylvia a little more and I hope she doesn't end up getting left out. (Although I don't know how she could in a series like this.) But both girls a lot just in different ways which is I'm sure what the author was going for. 5 stars for all 3 chapters so far.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
You didn't.....

You didn't. They climbed the hill for a CLIFF HANGER. 😎

I LOVE IT.

LtrockhardLtrockhardabout 4 years ago
Amazing

keep going!!

coreypeterscoreypetersabout 4 years ago
amazing

please continue this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Sylvia alone?

That damn cliff hanger i hate then! But I can't stop reading them

KlitomaticKlitomaticabout 4 years ago
OK

Now this is starting to get interesting. More !

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 4 years ago
Truly a love story

Such a well written series. Could have so many more erotic chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Confused

your changing chapter 1 and chapter 2 was confusing.

you don't read the middle of the story then go back and read the start of the story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Future chapters

I can kind of predict the brother-sister-sister play coming. In addition I would add:

A pair of survivors from the plane wreck show up. Could be another brother and sister from totally different family and end up staying with the other three. Fun!

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