All Comments on 'The Island of Three Ch. 05'

Continue the good the work. Love to read Tobias & Sylvia finally do it and possibly Tobias getting both Sylvia & Lexi pregnant at the same time. Hope you do get a editor for your future chapters. There were some mistakes but I enjoy reading this.

Take care

More please.

For "no editor" you did very well. I've read edited work here that had more spelling, syntax and grammar errors. A pre-reader would be good for a couple bumps I saw, but keep practicing and producing.

A lot plot building, and worth the wait. Glad to see the new one and can’t wait for the next. Keep writing. Love this series

So far this is like a dream come true. Island in the Caribbean, two hot sexy girls, that they're my sisters even hotter, doing better than most people on those survivor "reality" shows. This seems to be building to a wild 3some. I don't grade the writing, as long as it's readable, and this is very readable. Content doesn't have to be too realistic, just not way over the top. Biggest "complaint" is the teasing the reader. Now I have to wait for the next chapters!!! Thanks, AJ

Well what happens now? Please continue and with a 3some

Lexis? You mean Lexi's? Like Sylvias, instead of Silvias, many times? They're called apostrophes. Try using them once in a while.