by ainu
HOW REFRESHING! TOTALLY NEW IDEA PRESENTED PERFECTLY. HAVING VISITED 68 FOREIGN COUNTRIES AND HAVING HAD MANY GREAT TIMES, I'VE NEVER COME CLOSE TO THIS FABULOUS STORY!!!
WILL GO BACK AND READ ALL OTHERS FROM THIS FANTASTIC AUTHOR.
THANKS!!!!!!!!!!
Well written, and I also like the set up, but it comes off a little mechanical ("She did this...I did that....then she did this). No expression of real passion.