All Comments on 'The Jamaican Honeymoon'

Great work! I really enjoyed how each of the scenes evolved, and there was some real character development, which differentiates this story from so many others. I've been to Jamaica, a few times, and this story captures the feel of the place (although I never experienced anything near like what happens in the story). Fun to picture myself as part of one of the gang bangs.

There is definitely enough here for a full-length porn movie. Have you thought about doing a screenplay?

Definitely liked the sisters getting it on. Not hardcore incest, but sort of "situational." More of that would be good.

Keep up the great work!

Sounds like the author has spent time in Jamaica. Great story! A little something for most readers in this category. Keep it up, please.

Cum and lots of it. Jamaica is a good lance to get truly blacked. Good story xoxoxoxo Annette ♠️♠️♠️💋💋

Omg so debauched and depraved, totally outrageous and wonderful. Pure out of control sex lust, lusting for unlimited cunt, cock and cum. What would I not give to join a group like this, with the spiked water and booze and all the cunt I could handle.I adore cunt and cunt juice, the more I get the more I want. More and more like this please and soon. Cunt lapping sex maniac, Lanc’s UK.

next chapter please with taxi drivers friends on the girls

The first place I go once my divorce is final will be Jamaica! I want to find out if I can wear my cunt out! Surely I'll be able to find enough hard Black cocks to at least wear me out sexually..

Orpheum69

My sister and i went Jamaica and got gang banged the hotel barman arranged it and I’m sure he was charging the guy’s but who cares we are just 2 sluts who fell in love with bbc. Great story can’t wait for next part

Awesome writing, thanks for sharing