All Comments on 'The Janitor's Girl Pt. 02'

by st0rmbringer

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent writing!

Tryly looking forward to reading future chapters of this developing friendship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Something tells me he has a dark side that is unknown to anyone

scargazerscargazerover 1 year ago

I'm loving the slow burn. please continue on!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Look forward to read more of this !! Hope that you do not abandon the story

st0rmbringerst0rmbringerover 1 year agoAuthor

The story is 10 chapters long and it gets pretty juicy. I posted all 10 at the same time but literotica doesn't throw them up right away. It usually takes two to three days. I'm a noob to posting and didn't know they "review" them before making them live. Doubt there's an actual person reading the stuff we upload, probably some sort of bot.

Anyways, keep an eye out every few days for each new chapter. It'll take a bit but they're coming. Hope y'all enjoy the trip I take you on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent start. Please add more description of Heather - makeup, nail polish and heels. Perhaps you plan to include as she starts dressing slutty for him. Or even better he makes her dress for him or she doesn’t get to see him!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very erotic a young very innocent blonde girl awakening becoming a woman and an old black man ready to help her becoming one with a nice thick tool for her pleasure

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