All Comments on 'The Jealousy Game'

Oh my god that was hot!

This is the second time I've written a comment on this website, and both of them are for your stories. Well done! One thing that a lot of stories on this site are missing is realism. I completely felt as if not only this could happen, but did. Well painted picture.

You have a true talent for setting a believable scene with believable characters, and taking things just exactly where they need to go. Keep up the great work!

One of the hottest real stories, I have read on here

Normally don't like stories over two pages but this was great. A few typos but great story and great writing.

I normally never write a comment, but this is just too good. Keep it up and post some more!

I really enjoyed your story. Nicely done!

Sexy, but not rushed at all! Please more!

I read literotica a lot and few have a good character build up. This is one of them. The story felt so real and awesome. Thank you for it.

Thanks so much for a great, well written story.

Love the story please keep writing looking forward to the next one

Holy crap that was awesome! Love the character build up so we actually give a crap what's happening and then the descriptive sex scenes. Holy moley. Please say you're writing more.....

Great, sexy story. Flowed beautifully, thanks for sharing it.

cant wait to see more of them. nice man !

A very well written story - as were the other two of yours that I read tonight.

Please keep writing. You have a style that makes your characters real and believable and I love the seduction that goes both ways

I think this is your best submission. I especially like Kim's body type

This is an awesome one. Is a followup coming?

This has to be the most enjoyable and exciting story I’ve read so far.

You have a true talent and the ability to bring the story to life by capturing the readers imagination.

I've been followin literotica for several years now but this is the first time that I leave a comment for a story. Everything is just very very good, you have a lot of talent!

What a story! Exciting as fuck and very well written. Thank you for sharing it with us!

Great story. Romantic and dominate

Loving and naughty. The perfect mix

Wow! Great story.

very likable characters, and loved picture you painted of her body, other than being bald bald-understandable this day and age...I imprinted on natural...

and he scored big time when Kim turns out to like her rump rogered -!