by OnePenIsMightier
very likable characters, and loved picture you painted of her body, other than being bald bald-understandable this day and age...I imprinted on natural...
and he scored big time when Kim turns out to like her rump rogered -!
What a story! Exciting as fuck and very well written. Thank you for sharing it with us!
I've been followin literotica for several years now but this is the first time that I leave a comment for a story. Everything is just very very good, you have a lot of talent!
This has to be the most enjoyable and exciting story I’ve read so far.
You have a true talent and the ability to bring the story to life by capturing the readers imagination.
I think this is your best submission. I especially like Kim's body type
A very well written story - as were the other two of yours that I read tonight.
Please keep writing. You have a style that makes your characters real and believable and I love the seduction that goes both ways
Holy crap that was awesome! Love the character build up so we actually give a crap what's happening and then the descriptive sex scenes. Holy moley. Please say you're writing more.....
I read literotica a lot and few have a good character build up. This is one of them. The story felt so real and awesome. Thank you for it.
I normally never write a comment, but this is just too good. Keep it up and post some more!
Normally don't like stories over two pages but this was great. A few typos but great story and great writing.
You have a true talent for setting a believable scene with believable characters, and taking things just exactly where they need to go. Keep up the great work!
This is the second time I've written a comment on this website, and both of them are for your stories. Well done! One thing that a lot of stories on this site are missing is realism. I completely felt as if not only this could happen, but did. Well painted picture.