All Comments on 'The Jenna Arrangement Pt. 01'

Interesting premise.

But all so one-sided. She could have gotten turned on the point that she reached under her skirt and played with herself a bit even if he didn't get to see the actual fingering, and even if she didn't cum. And she could have squeezed her clothes-covered breasts. Perhaps she could have asked him if he minded -- which he wouldn't have.

Four stars.

I wanted Jenna's reactions to be as realistic as possible without being utterly non responsive given the scenario. Her soaked panties hinted at more than she was letting on. Things will progress in part 2 I promise 😀

Well written and erotic. Made the scenario as plausible as possible. Good job

I don't get the first anynymous' post. The writing is excellent, the spelling and grammar also excellent and the plot very believable.

Dear Anonymous, if you don't like the way the story progresses, why don't you write your own? Is it a case of those who can't write criticize? I think he handled what had to be a very awkward and embarrassing very, very well. The next time they get together more can be expected to happen but, in my admittedly personal opinion it was easier to believe written the way it was with Jenna exploring the idea of watching a stranger deliberately masturbate in front of her somewhat conservatively, considering.

Five stars, not the four you gave because the author couldn't read your mind and write the story the way you wanted.

This is one of those things I look back on and wish I'd edited better. I was in a rush to simply get the tale told and up and didn't really think much about editing. I promise future chapters have been better edited.

Simply Amazing! I completely loved the realism of this fantasy. It's a breath of fresh air to read something so well written that doesn't involve totally unbelievable activity. Thank you!

@justins961 thanks I really appreciate it. Hopefully you enjoy the rest of the story. I've tried to keep it as real as possible but of course the more you continue a tale the more it branches off into the less probable lol. But I do try to keep it at least almost believable

Loved this story. It is really one of my greatest fantasies. Please keep writing panty stories.

Very sweet. You wrote Jenna very well - I have a little crush on her. And I’m 53, so yeah, it resonated just a bit...This is the kind of intelligent, thoughtful story that makes lit worth reading.

Far above the usual story . You can be proud of the contribution .

Loved it. 5 * all the way. Up to ch 4 now and it's still great. The slow build is fabulous, just teasing enough.

So I went back and edited this story to correct several mistakes (and now looking at it, I still missed a few lol) so hopefully it reads a little better. And yes, I corrected the word "ad" lol. I've had several people point out I spelled it "add." That's haunted me since day 1

This story and the whole series is superb, bringing in rounded characters and not just actions. Keep up the quality and as a Man Of A Certain Age I can say; I wish I could be Tom.

I love this series (I have read the first 7), but especially the first chapter. It has great tension and unpredictability which make for a great story. The others are good, as well, but lacks some of the tension of the first one. Look forward to reading more.

@questionman99: thank you.

I suppose there's no way to truly recapture that original tension in what's now become a recurring series. Although I do have some ideas that will expand on the original CFNM origin and try to get back to more of those kinds of explorations as things progress between the two leads.

5 stars

I wondered what you where referring to in the 'Clothing descriptions are HARD!'. I can see where it matters in this story.

I will share that I have truly enjoyed the Jenna series at least up through chapter 9 (as that is all the further I have read). They are very well written. For me they are both erotic and passionate yet about as real as fantasy gets. The author provides depth to the characters of Tom and Jenna and to some extent Teresa as well. So far all of the characters and scenarios are "believable", well as believable as they can be ;) I am pacing myself so as not to finish the series too quickly LOL. Great work

Brilliantly told - 5-stars

Wow, this was very good.

It wasn't what I was looking for when I clicked on the Exhibitionist and Voyeur tags, but I certainly have no regrets.

Except that now I have to keep reading, when I have stories of my own to work on ;->

This is a WONDERFUL story, with fantasies realized while sharing mutual respect!

Tender & erotic, so well written.

I look forward to their journey.

Thank you!

That was so sweet and touching, while also erotic. The same thing happened to my panties as to Jenna’s 🤭. Will read some more when I have time. 5⭐️s. Em

After hearing about it on the forums, I finally got around to reading it. You don't disappoint. Two very likable characters, well written. I'll be reading more. Well done.

Excellent again Dj, a tricky yet erotic scenario masterfully handled. On to ch2!

SO good. So good. Thank you for writing.