All Comments on 'The Jenna Arrangement Pt. 14'

by Djmac1031

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justins961justins961over 2 years ago

Absolutely amazing! Not in the least bit too long. Hurry up with the next chapter!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I love this one. One of the best in the series! And yeah, it's not too long at all. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Finally writing a comment after reading all 14 chapters in order. I enjoy the story, and the story arc. As fantasies go, this one is believable. Keep up the good work.

SirviceSirviceover 2 years ago

Absolutely brilliant, more please. Well thought out, can’t wait till the next chapter comes

JayDee_DunnJayDee_Dunnover 2 years ago

This series just keeps getting better, great work 👍🏻

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This nails one of my favorite fantasies! Alas, not feasible in my reality, but a fondly pondered dream. Nice work!

Writer2000Writer2000over 1 year ago

I'm really enjoying this series. Your character delineation is very good. Just by way of constructive criticism - I think you could have made the girls' party much more erotic by adding a lot more detail about the contrast between the girls being dressed and Tommy nude. Flirty comments and glances, little touches, his feelings of exposure etc. etc. It's such an unusual and highly sexually charged situation that it offers myriad possibilities. Well done though, your writing quality is way above average on Literotica. Thank you!

cmj711cmj711about 1 year ago

I wish you'd get an award for your series!

I keep giving you 5 starts, doesn't seem enough. xox

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Just a guy with a vivid imagination. I've always loved reading erotic stories, figured I'd try writing my own. You'll probably start noticing my particular kinks and recurring themes as my stories progress. Conversations welcomed, feel free to leave comments or send PMs....

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