by Djmac1031
Absolutely amazing! Not in the least bit too long. Hurry up with the next chapter!!
I love this one. One of the best in the series! And yeah, it's not too long at all. Keep it up!
Finally writing a comment after reading all 14 chapters in order. I enjoy the story, and the story arc. As fantasies go, this one is believable. Keep up the good work.
Absolutely brilliant, more please. Well thought out, can’t wait till the next chapter comes
This nails one of my favorite fantasies! Alas, not feasible in my reality, but a fondly pondered dream. Nice work!
I'm really enjoying this series. Your character delineation is very good. Just by way of constructive criticism - I think you could have made the girls' party much more erotic by adding a lot more detail about the contrast between the girls being dressed and Tommy nude. Flirty comments and glances, little touches, his feelings of exposure etc. etc. It's such an unusual and highly sexually charged situation that it offers myriad possibilities. Well done though, your writing quality is way above average on Literotica. Thank you!
I wish you'd get an award for your series!
I keep giving you 5 starts, doesn't seem enough. xox