All Comments on 'The Job Offer Ch. 03'

Great story so far, looking forward to the next installment. I was sure his friend was a Vampire hunter, but not a Werewolf. I guess he is just not a "norm". Not sure about all the lip bitting, I would think they would get chapped over time, LOL. I do agree with previous comments on trying to get an editor and not rely on electronic versions. Minor issues throughout, can slow down the flow however not a story killer at all. I can't say too much as I am not a English expert nor good at writing. Thanks for this story and sharing it with us.

Great story please keep it going!!