All Comments on 'The Job Offer Ch. 04'

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UncletoddUncletoddover 1 year ago

Usually I don't enjoy and read stories like this but I am really enjoying yours and looking forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Still loving this story, anxiously waiting to see how the story unfolds. The dreams are very intriguing.

Snipe85Snipe85about 1 year ago

Dammm. I thought Chapter 1 was amazing but reading the following chapters was Awesome. Plese continue the story, 5 Stars

KahunabobKahunabobabout 1 year ago

Man, once you get past your grammar style there's a fun story being told here. Although it's a good thing both Sam and Sasha have supernatural healing... with all the sex going on between these two, it's a miracle they're both not chafed raw like fresh road rash after a motor cycle accident :-)

One more chapter to go, currently. If it's an open ended chapter, I'd love to see more chapters past chapter 5.

WargamerWargamerabout 1 year ago

Excellent story 5/5 now to read on

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Most of all my stories come from dreams. I have vivid dreams that linger and I get obsessed; then I get the urge to write them down. The Job Offer was edited by ProWritingAid; I also used this software for The Lewd Hollistic Chap 7. Still a novice writer but hope to get bet...

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