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Click here"They called the shop this morning. Said they scouted the area and we were their first choice." Doug grabbed Marissa around the waist and spun her around again. "This means I won't have to sell any land and the boys will inherit the full Molson dynasty."
"Where should we go?" Marissa asked smiling as it all finally sank in.
"Where else? The Burger Barn," Doug said, smiling, "I may be rich, but I still have no class. Plus the boys love the place." Marissa jumped into his arms and kissed her goggle-wearing, sawdust-covered, pinstripe-suit-wearing man.
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Jayden watched Beverly and Susan go through the paint swatches as they tried to pick the best colors for the nursery. Beverly had given Susan carte blanche to decorate her new brother's or sister's room. It was amazing how many decisions needed to be made for such a small room. Beverly caught his curious eyes and smiled. He couldn't believe how good she looked pregnant. She was pretty before, but now she was absolutely radiant.
A knock on the door brought Jayden back to reality. He smiled at Beverly and answered the door. A well-dressed man in a three-piece suit was standing there. The man tossed an airtight bag of Caravan Coffee to Jayden which he caught. "Alejandro Mendoza says it's done," the man said quickly. He turned, not waiting for or expecting a response, and left. Jayden bounced the bag in his hand as he closed the door. Jayden would have loved to see the look on Marissa's face.
"Who was that?" Beverly asked.
"Coffee delivery." Jayden smiled at his angel. All was right with the world.
Great story. I didn't expect anything less from this writer. This was my 2nd time reading it and I enjoyed it just as much.
Sad to ruin a great story with a stupid 3 way. But I shouldn’t expect more from a story on a sex site…so…my bad.
Nice story. I did not like how you presented the drug cartel. It soured my view Making them look human when they are really greedy, sadistic narcissists who kill and ruin millions. Really made me sad. Your not alone, so many other storytellers do the same and romanticize them as nice or normal. My brother's son lived miserably with his drug problems, He and million of others would agree that letting the cartel always win is bad.
So the great Don was human after all, just like all husbands. The wife has the last word. All to the good for the sake of Jayden and Beverly. But you could have extended the story a little longer. Would have loved to hear about Marissa getting pregnant with Doug's child, and Beverly being a mother.
Really enjoyable series. Deserves a follow up for the loose ends. Sandra. The new baby. Susan dating etc. Thanks for writing this. BardnotBard
Yeah, a wonderfully strange story and exciting story, still 5 stars the second time around, a little less sex scenes and more story would have even been better.
What a wonderfully strange story about a wonderfully strange couple!
I totally disagree with those who critisized the last scene with Bev and that very special Escort/hooker. It was well done and very much added to and complimented the whole story.
Just simply perfect. I know you don’t write any more for Lit, but many, many thanks for leaving what you’ve written still posted here despite the thieves, every single story a gem. Cheers Ppfzz.
Just a top notch story from beginning to end. Characters that make you care about them
I used all my words up on the previous chapters. Great second tome read! Thanks to the editor and our author.
This is the 12th story of yours that I’ve read and can’t beehive that each story each story just keeps getting better than the last! I’m an old movie buff so I’d already deduced what was coming for the two assassins and I bawled but I wasn’t expecting that awesome f-ing plot twist!! I was kind of mad over Beverly and the hooker hooking up but for them and the situation, it made perfect sense. Your brain and imagination are a wondrous thing! Thank you for sharing it with us.
DreamCloud,
Your writing is so satisfying, expertly woven, every detail completely finalized.
Thank you so much.
Steve Scott.
You are a wonderful writer, and you really brought the characters to life.you also made me cum more times than I could count, but that happens to me often. Though I have had stories I couldn't finish with on lit. But you really know how to set the screws.