The Job Pt. 08

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"They called the shop this morning. Said they scouted the area and we were their first choice." Doug grabbed Marissa around the waist and spun her around again. "This means I won't have to sell any land and the boys will inherit the full Molson dynasty."

"Where should we go?" Marissa asked smiling as it all finally sank in.

"Where else? The Burger Barn," Doug said, smiling, "I may be rich, but I still have no class. Plus the boys love the place." Marissa jumped into his arms and kissed her goggle-wearing, sawdust-covered, pinstripe-suit-wearing man.

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Jayden watched Beverly and Susan go through the paint swatches as they tried to pick the best colors for the nursery. Beverly had given Susan carte blanche to decorate her new brother's or sister's room. It was amazing how many decisions needed to be made for such a small room. Beverly caught his curious eyes and smiled. He couldn't believe how good she looked pregnant. She was pretty before, but now she was absolutely radiant.

A knock on the door brought Jayden back to reality. He smiled at Beverly and answered the door. A well-dressed man in a three-piece suit was standing there. The man tossed an airtight bag of Caravan Coffee to Jayden which he caught. "Alejandro Mendoza says it's done," the man said quickly. He turned, not waiting for or expecting a response, and left. Jayden bounced the bag in his hand as he closed the door. Jayden would have loved to see the look on Marissa's face.

"Who was that?" Beverly asked.

"Coffee delivery." Jayden smiled at his angel. All was right with the world.

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strawboystrawboy19 days ago

Good read with everything tied up neatly at the end.

1_Inquiring_mind1_Inquiring_mindabout 1 month ago

An interesting ride through out. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Sad to ruin a great story with a stupid 3 way. But I shouldn’t expect more from a story on a sex site…so…my bad.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Great Series! You write Very Well, and really Hold an audience! Thank You!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Nice story. I did not like how you presented the drug cartel. It soured my view Making them look human when they are really greedy, sadistic narcissists who kill and ruin millions. Really made me sad. Your not alone, so many other storytellers do the same and romanticize them as nice or normal. My brother's son lived miserably with his drug problems, He and million of others would agree that letting the cartel always win is bad.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

So the great Don was human after all, just like all husbands. The wife has the last word. All to the good for the sake of Jayden and Beverly. But you could have extended the story a little longer. Would have loved to hear about Marissa getting pregnant with Doug's child, and Beverly being a mother.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Really enjoyable series. Deserves a follow up for the loose ends. Sandra. The new baby. Susan dating etc. Thanks for writing this. BardnotBard

campomancampoman10 months ago

Exciting, surprising, sexy! Great story!

oldmanbill69oldmanbill69about 1 year ago

Would like a follow up.

oldmanbill69oldmanbill69about 1 year ago

Damn! I hate to see it end.

LifeisadventureLifeisadventureabout 1 year ago

Great story well done. 5 stars

dgfergiedgfergieover 1 year ago

Yeah, a wonderfully strange story and exciting story, still 5 stars the second time around, a little less sex scenes and more story would have even been better.

BlueEyd2BlueEyd2over 1 year ago

What a wonderfully strange story about a wonderfully strange couple!

I totally disagree with those who critisized the last scene with Bev and that very special Escort/hooker. It was well done and very much added to and complimented the whole story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

absolutely butchered the story on the last chapter. you hate to see it

tonyneatotonyneatoalmost 2 years ago

Excellent !!! 5 BIG STARS

PurplefizzPurplefizzalmost 2 years ago

Just simply perfect. I know you don’t write any more for Lit, but many, many thanks for leaving what you’ve written still posted here despite the thieves, every single story a gem. Cheers Ppfzz.

MwestohioMwestohioabout 2 years ago

Just a top notch story from beginning to end. Characters that make you care about them

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