All Comments on 'The Jock in My Sketchbook Ch. 01'

by Birdragon25

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CorjixCorjixover 2 years ago

Hi. Good start. Gave you a "5" and a "Follow".

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A very good start to a story. Definitely keep going with it!

DoccoolmanDoccoolmanover 2 years ago

Keep going you are doing well.

GybbsGybbsover 2 years ago

I'm another 5 star / Follower. I'm going to enjoy this, I'm sure!

dnsontndnsontnover 2 years ago

An impressive start! Five Stars and Following so I won’t miss your next post

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

If Nate is sketching Jordan from a photograph -- and thinking of "improving" Jordan's physical features in the sketch -- why not add a splash of sexy chest hair for his masculine sportsman chest? Get these sexy guys together, please!

Birdragon25Birdragon25over 2 years agoAuthor

Hello, thanks for all the feedbacks, I will be improving the flow of the story and add more details to the sketches.

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Thomas_LodgeThomas_Lodgeover 2 years ago

Great first story, loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I can answer your questions: he's cut, and small. It would be very unusual for a Filipino to be uncut, and uncommon to be anything but small.

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