by Orgin Grinder
....good writing in developing the ladies horniness and sexuality !! .now, please write some stories about their new jobs as the beach bar's erotic masseuses at the Hilton's nudist resort in Cancun..they are popular and average 18 half hour "sessions" per day and they are live on the internet 24/7..the NFL & NBA NAACP conference is coming..Shak (7'6"380LB.) has a 2hr. "sessions" each day ..the resort has to build bleachers for the loud audiences..what fun,,Looking forward to your next stories ...thanks..
I went back and read them all but this series is so hoooot. Its totally unbeleivable, but you make it sound real. Plus you did a great job of connecting the stories and bringing the relationships up to date. Seriously I ave a wet spot in my underwear.
You lost me on Page 1 when some female shows the breasts under her "sports bar".