All Comments on 'The Journalists Ch. 02'

Bet the magazine is pissed at losing them...lol

Well written as usual wifethief

Thank you, though I eagerly await her story.

And I see it's up

Memo to self...check titles of all new submissions before commenting.

disturbing, but i came. sigh. 5 stars.

Or could this story be any worse? When you write about people that seem to have an IQ of 10 it makes for a terrible story. This was an example.

Good story but would to here Ruthie's .side

I agree with the above commmenter... It doesnt feel like Ruthie are Ted are very intelligent.. Would they really just break up and deicde to do this for a news article? lol

That just doesnt sit right for me...

I guess its well written but content wise I dont like it.

Good stories. Very different approach. You are a talented writer. "Suspension of disbelief" helps enjoy this one as fantasy. However I do feel it is a bit of a stretch in my humble opinion. None the less, fantasmic writing! I guess a friendly challenge.... Are you creative enough to make this crazy scenario have another chapter? I'm sure you are but what a complex plotline to try and continue. Again, great writing! Thanks

I have noticed this before and I don't get it.

A girl sub is forced to have sex whether or not she wants to. But, of course, it is really what she wants. Sometimes, the DBSM is just the excuse she needs to let her wild side out.

But a boy sub, is denied sex and orgasms for the rest of his life. Why does this make any sense? The boy sub might be using BDSM in the same way to let his wild side out, but instead it is chained and denied.

This is so crazy to me that I have never really explored submission because what is threatened is the opposite of what I want.

Steve

You are not the only one mystified by this phenomenon. I am surprised how many MALE writers seem to have the fantasy of having everything taken from them. Female writers seem mixed in the treatment of male subs, but too many also take this view. As a female myself, I see male submission as being as much of a gift to cherish as female submission. To guide, to control, to uplift and to protect-not to dismantle, to deny and denigrate. This is how I see the RESPONSIBILITY of the dominate towards the submissive, regardless of gender. So much of what is called erotica is merely torture porn. 'Fantasy' that distorts reality for too many.

To be fully appreciated,this story needed two things. 1) A description of Ruthie’s indoctrination and experiences during the 2 months and,2)a closing related to the outcome of the magazine’s investment and potential story. After finishing this story it felt as if I’d been thoroughly edged but not allowed to cum!