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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Very well done for a first submission. Hope this story will be continued.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Paragraph

Try to use smaller paragraphs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Re: Paragraphs

Actually, she had it nicely formatted and a lot of the formatting got removed in the submission process (she is My sissy submissive)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Imagination!!

Wow. Enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Sorry, but unless it is reformatted with more paragraph breaks, it is unreadable

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