All Comments on 'The Journey of Grace Ch. 07'

by -Ripley-

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Rad'l about 15 years ago

Well done

Well written, good character development, good descriptions. The only drawbacks were a few typos that slightly slowed down the flow. Would it be asking too much to expect a critical final edit? Thanks for the work though.

Anonymousabout 15 years ago

Getting exciting.

Please keep going as your writing style really pulls us in. I look forward to see where this leads.

Anonymousover 13 years ago

AWESOME

This is one of the most well written stories I've found. I absolutely love it! I hope that Grace can come to terms with herself and get Marie back... they belong together... Great story!! Fantastic work! <3

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