The Journey Pt. 01

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Sometime during the night, Felicia got dressed and left. Tim and Janice didn't even notice until the following morning.

Janice had a smile on her face when she awoke the next day. It wasn't just because she was liberated sexually. She had made it! She had done everything Tim asked and had not used the safe word one time. Now the only thing she had to do is get Tim to use the safe word one time and she would win. She started thinking of names for her baby.

When Tim came downstairs, Janice had already fixed breakfast for them.

"Good morning lover," Janice said with a bright smile as she poured coffee.

Tim face had been somewhat sullen until he saw her smile. He had been more than a little worried that she would be angry about last night. "Uh... good morning. Uh... are you okay with last night?" he asked hesitantly as he sat at the table.

Janice stopped pouring the coffee and looked pensively for a second. "Well, I guess I'm a little embarrassed to admit it but..." she hesitated, drawing out the suspense on purpose. "I loved it."

Tim almost sighed with relief. He looked at Janice and smiled. "So how did you like your week?"

"I think you know how I liked it," Janice said as she took a seat across from him.

"Yea, I guess I do. Uh... uh, about my week," Tim said referring to the game.

"Yes," Janice asked when he hesitated.

"Well, I was thinking uh... I'm pretty sure you are going to win this thing."

"What are you trying to say?" Janice asked.

"I guess... I guess that I'm conceding. You win!"

Janice looked at him like she didn't understand. Suddenly, it dawned on her. She jumped up, screamed and rushing onto Tim's lap so fast that the chair almost tilted over backward. She kissed his lips then all over his face. "Thank you sweetheart," she said as tears streamed down her cheeks. She hugged him tightly.

"We need to talk honey," Tim said as Janice continued to hug him.

"About what?" she asked as she pulled back and wiped her eyes.

"Well, for one thing, where we go from here. I mean... are we going to... uh you know, go back to the way we were?

"I don't think we can," Janice said as she felt a little thrill run through her.

"Does that mean that we... uh can do things? You know, like this past week." Suddenly Tim was very nervous.

"Well, we'll have to see," Janice said seriously. Suddenly she smiled. "I still have Dan's phone number and that was an excellent massage."

"Oh God," Tim moaned. He picked her up and carried her toward the bedroom, leaving the breakfast forgotten on the table.

The End

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Anallicker01Anallicker015 months ago

Excellent story how hubby weaved a game into their lives to save their marriage! I failed to check, is there another chapter?

AnnalovesitAnnalovesit9 months ago

Absolutely loved it, nicely told.

Pinupfan53Pinupfan53about 1 year ago

i loved your story, well written and so believable. Thanks

PiusPaulPiusPaulabout 1 year ago

An amazing and excellent story! Very well told and written. Thank you!

OCafuneOCafuneabout 1 year ago

Couldn't stop... The story flows well. Excellent!

kvp511kvp511over 1 year ago

Excellent story. Great writing style that keeps you wanting to read more. Please keep up the stories since they are very exciting!!

oneidlehandoneidlehandover 1 year ago

First time I've attempted AND completed a long story. Well done!

MommasSunMommasSunalmost 2 years ago

So fucking string. I arrived here via your amazing mom/son stories. My only issue is your long retirement! Come back to us brother. 10 stars!!

gladventurergladventurerabout 2 years ago

Amazing job! Well done! Tnanks for sharing. So many things I liked about. Especially, the openness between them, starting with the conversation that started this Journey. I loved the exchange when Tim let it slip he thought she was a prude. I loved her angry response and especially loved her coming to accept that he was right and admitting it to him. That was real. That was fresh. Being vulnerable with each other. Many other things too. I loved the gradual build and the things Tim had her do that lead her gently into a sexual awakening. I loved the variety of things he had her do and I loved being inside her mind as she walked through the process of resisting, to opening up to it, to totally embracing it and how it seemed to truly bring them together. Very believable and very enjoyable. Most of all I loved that it truly did seem to bring them together! Until.....

.....the re-introduction of Dan into the story

I would have liked the situation with Dan to have gone way differently. When I first read that pert of the story with Dan, I immediately felt a negative shift in the energy of the story. Later I started thinking how I would have liked that encounter to go and I thought perhaps it could have been a brilliant idea to re-introduce the guy that Janice cheated with and was infatuated with and help her (hopefully) to get past it, to realize that she only loves her husband now (more than ever) and stops Dan. At the point he penetrates her, I wanted her to stop as she comes to this grand realization about her relationship and love for Tim. She could apologize for leading him on and then explain the depth of her love for her husband and why she doesn't want to go through with this act. She might even confess her and Tim's agreement and that he is aware of what she's doing and is ok with it (or at least he says he is), but that she is not ok with it. She thought she was but she just realized she is not ok with it anymore. That she now knew in her heart that if she did this with Dan it wasn't going to be just about sex and that she no longer wanted to or felt the need or desire to go there.

Think about it. Tim gave Janice a "free pass" twice during this little friendly competition. Before they had anal sex and before she let Dan fuck her. The first pass was easy to understand, he didn't want her to feel forced into anal, whether physically or mentally. He wanted her to have an open mind and feel safe, knowing she could stop it at any moment. Nobody wants to have sex with someone who isn't really into it especially someone you love. The second pass I think he gave her because deep down he wanted her to use it. He wanted her to say "no" to Dan. He didn't want her feeling pressured into saying yes to Dan just to win a contest. He didn't want to stop her, he wanted her to stop herself not out of obligation to him but because she didn't want to violate her deep love for her husband. He wanted her to be free of this past guilt from cheating on him with Dan, to quit fantasizing about another man. How liberating for her and for Tim if in chasing her sexual fantasy of sleeping with Dan, she comes to the realization (in the heat of the moment) that it's Tim she loves completely and she doesn't want to be unfaithful to him even if he says he's ok with it and he say's he likes to watch. Maybe he likes to watch partly because he's waiting for that moment when Janice says "no" to strange love because love with Tim is now more exciting, more rewarding, even more edgy. That she doesn't need this fantasy anymore, she's got a better reality than she ever imagined, now that she has truly opened up sexually to Tim. I think it would have been a better story if she had used the second "free pass" and said no to Dan. But, it was an amazing story even if it didn't go that way and an easy 5+. Well done and thanks for sharing your writing talent with us.

Robbert1953Robbert1953over 2 years ago

Thank you for a very well written erotic story. I keep reading different writers stories and am amazed at how the next writer seems to have a different twist on similar stories but they are all soooooo good. I am looking forward to reading more from you. Erotica at its best. Thank you.

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